Feedback

Worst Feedback:

• "Wow, this is really good. I wouldn't change anything." (useless)
• "I don't get it." (I asked why) "The words are too big. You should use littler (sic) words." 

Best:

• "The professor told us to never use dictionary definitions verbatim in the text." (given to me in an impromptu peer editing session last semester)
• Narrow the focus (of my literary analysis of a poem) to a single symbol (a professor)
• There's a website for MLA (Purdue Owl)
• It's too analytical. I can't hear your voice in it. (peer editor, last semester)