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It was hard to respond to others because I was afraid of hurting feelings. I also struggled with how much or how little to say, and I'm sure I said too much on the first paper I did. Grammar correction would have been easy, but it was inappropriate (it needs to come later). In accordance with Harris, my feedback was appropriate for the first revision phase, with comments primarily about structure and connections. My writers already told me that my comments about the conclusion being the thesis and that more support for and clarity in arguments helped them the most. In the future I will remember not to write on a student's paper to do anything but final proof-reading (grammar mechanics).