Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Drafts From the Drawing Board

This is the second draft. 
This is the second version of the first draft.
This is the first version of the first draft (more or less).
Lessons from the Drawing Board....
I wanted my posters to "pop" with a succinct message that would intrigue a potential reader. For me, dramatic colors are important. Since my topic is writing, I wanted to use iconic images and colors - yellow for writing paper and classic pencils. Since my paper emphasizes the Grammar Wars, and resolution to them, I wanted a "military" (in a pacifist sort of way, of course) look to the graphics. I decided on toy soldiers.  On my first layout the text is both centered and off-center to try to gather interest. However on my second draft it was distracting - so the text is centered and the graphic is skewed. I used "pedagogy" on one and "teach" on the other, and at the moment I am leaning toward "teach" for the terminology. The text in the first poster has some passive voice, which I am not sure about, so in the second poster I took it out. I futzed a lot more with the first poster but I am happier with the second.


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